with the feedback i got from my classmates and tutors i looked into my two strongest ideas, time to grow up and stoping living in your bubble,
the feedback i got was to change the font for the top headline, soften
the hair more, less text for the bottom information, try out suing different genders and neutral gender colours also try make the photography even more dramatic
time to grow up edit ^
another grow up edit ^
don't stay trapped in your bubble idea ^
another grow up edit ^
